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He Is Not You

He says the words to me I long for you to say He does the things for me I long for you to do He feels for me the way I long for you to feel From the depths of my soul oh how I wish he were you

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/9/2012 6:15:00 AM

Attention and sweet words ....... do not let yourself melt. - :) - - - A very good poem Joan Marie. - - Have a nice Sunday. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Faleeha Hassan

Date: 12/7/2012 3:54:00 PM

Wonderful poet You are always close to my soul in your words And I hear the voice of my soul in these words

Joanmarie Peranteau
Date: 12/7/2012 8:57:00 PM

Thank you Faleeha for such a beautiful and sweet comment. Those words you just expressed in your comment is poetry. I feel the same way about you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/6/2012 5:47:00 PM

Joan, wow... sometimes i wish my man was the other one... ... thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Looking forward to reading more of your poems tonight. Always~ & Forever ;-) PD

Joanmarie Peranteau
Date: 12/6/2012 6:33:00 PM

Thank you....I Appreciate your encouraging comment.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/6/2012 2:16:00 PM

Very powerful, why is it that the person we desire is so different from the person we need them to be?? Still we are inexplicably attracted to them.

Joanmarie Peranteau
Date: 12/6/2012 5:19:00 PM

Thank you. I know, but that's the way the story goes though alot of times in life.

David Williams

Date: 12/6/2012 11:01:00 AM

JoanMarie a big welcome to the soup, I do like this, but don't live in regret, well done...David

Joanmarie Peranteau
Date: 12/6/2012 12:15:00 PM

Thank you David, I appreciate your comment & advice.