"he Is My Dad"

It was a night,very dark night
no moon and not its small light in the sky
so dark,everywhere dark
sitting alone a girl in her window all night gazing that sky
with full of hope in her watery eyes,
that a blinking object she will  definitely find,
which she knows-it's her and will always be looking at her,
no matter it is day or night.

still dark and no hope of single light in that night,
but waiting, wants to wave her hand, talk, and cry,
to say how much she loves him,
how much she misses him,
again wants to say please come back,
to that blinking object in the sky,
which is a STAR, THE MOST BRIGHTEST, SHE COULD ALWAYS SEE AND FIND

oh! almighty,have you made that star to go away somewhere?
she asked......sighes.........took a long deep breath
with the sharp pain she feels at that time
in the middle of her chest everywhere,
with teary eyes,
BUT,
still smiling to welcome,
still strong and lots of hopes in her heart ,
that her star will come and twinkle above her window, beside.
gathering all the memories as much she recognize
as once she was told,
that every beloved becomes STAR after they died
AND she is convinced and has been waiting so long,
that her beloved star will come back twinkling
and she will say,
“HE IS MY DAD”..........................


-this poem is dedicated to my father who always taught me to always love and care 
everyone and be the best that i could be.thanks for everything dad and your daughter 
misses you so much.i know you are always with me,looking at me....I promise i'll accomplish 
your dreams one day.you mean everything to me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/28/2016 8:25:00 AM
Renu, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 8/9/2009 11:06:00 AM
Very nicely written tribute to your father,Renu. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/8/2009 11:01:00 PM
there is poetry that speaks to us like a story. Enjoyed this poetry here and enjoy your night.
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Date: 8/8/2009 4:41:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to Dad, Sincerely Moses WELCOME TO SOUP
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Date: 8/8/2009 8:16:00 AM
Sincere words folds in...beautiful poetry.
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Date: 8/8/2009 5:23:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Renu. I wish you the very best in your writing. Love, Carol
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