He Is

He smiles; I cry.
He is brave; I am shy.
He can love; I'm alone.
He's amazing; I'm unknown.
He is beautiful; I'm a mess.
He is happy; I'm depressed.
He is fake; I am real.
He is heartless; I can feel.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Inka Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 10:45 PM
Well written, Great rhyme, Great flow, great depth. I give it a 7
Chappell Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 4:37 PM
i like this peice my freind
Adeite Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 5:23 PM
Hey Amanda this is out of this world, I have never read something like this before, you are one of your kind. I am dumbfounded with this. keep making your wonderful pen dance to the lyrics of your heart and stay great. welcome to the Soup, you will enjoy this great group it's nothing but the sweetest Soup. hey how about me meeting you? stay great! Love always. Adeleke
Palli Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 10:33 AM
loved it!
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