He Is

He smiles; I cry. He is brave; I am shy. He can love; I'm alone. He's amazing; I'm unknown. He is beautiful; I'm a mess. He is happy; I'm depressed. He is fake; I am real. He is heartless; I can feel.

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Joe Inka

Date: 2/21/2011 10:45:00 PM

Well written, Great rhyme, Great flow, great depth. I give it a 7

Duncan Chappell

Date: 12/7/2010 4:37:00 PM

i like this peice my freind

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 12/4/2010 5:23:00 PM

Hey Amanda this is out of this world, I have never read something like this before, you are one of your kind. I am dumbfounded with this. keep making your wonderful pen dance to the lyrics of your heart and stay great. welcome to the Soup, you will enjoy this great group it's nothing but the sweetest Soup. hey how about me meeting you? stay great! Love always. Adeleke

Susan Palli

Date: 11/30/2010 10:33:00 AM

loved it!