He Crossed the Line

He loaded his family of 7 in a little silver van
knowing it could have all been prevented
No seatbelts on even the smallest of hand
his impatience with the semi ended
along with the tiniest of cries
now the rest of the family wonders why?
 
Chorus*He didnt wanna wait
            so he crossed the line
            he sealed his fate
            and destroyed every life
            never looked twice
            into the bigger picture
            he didnt wanna wait
            before he crossed the line*
 
He heard the door close
turned to see her cry
sighed a breath of regret
knowing he could never try
He just didnt love her
the way he knew he should
he belonged to another
and hurt her as he knew he would
 
Chorus*He didnt wanna wait
            so he crossed the line
            he sealed his fate
            and destroyed her life
            never looked twice
            into the bigger picture
            he didnt wanna wait
            before he crossed the line*
 
Bridge* Anyway you look at it
            someone always gets broken
            when the hand of greed
            rips into the wide open*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/25/2010 1:55:00 PM
Good work..Glad that I chose to read this one today..Sara
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Date: 11/25/2010 8:53:00 AM
i sing. i can harmonize with anyone. that's one thing that i'm known for around here anyway. i hope i did'nt scare you with my comments. i'd like to be friends. you wont replace April, you'll just be another April that i know. please.
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Date: 11/25/2010 6:50:00 AM
Nice here, I see som of myself in your work...Love your take on "Set too Sea" or "A Smile Kept"...Happy thanksgiving to you and all that make you smile...Michael
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