He Cried

I thought he was cold and empty,
his mind so disconnected, he couldn't feel
The fits of rage, so hard to deal with,
at times, I questioned my own sanity

Then he cried

Such an ordinary thing to do, for him not
So stunned was I, that I thought I was wrong
That choked up voice, brought me to his side
Like a child, he foolishly denyed turmoil

Then he cried

Tears running down his face, lip quivering,
trying despartly to hold back raw emotion
Insisting, that not a thing was the matter
Admitting in a moment of weakness, the hurt,

Then he cried

for the aching sadness of missing a loved one
Fear of never having that family connection
So many years, gone in a heart beat
Age, morality, bringing feelings of stark reality

Then he cried

Reasuring words came from my mouth
My heart broke and filled at the same time
Trusting my words, his mind now eased
I turned and walked out the door

Than I cried
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Beaudre Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 8:52 AM
This one is so sweet!
Hickman Avatar
July 28, 2009 at 9:11 PM
an understanding heart shows within this piece along with the felings of the subject, tortured and sad, a sad write but shared with definate respect and talent,,,blessings..Cecil,,and Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts behind.
Brown Avatar
July 14, 2009 at 9:07 AM
Karla, this just leaves me speechless on the verge of a full out cry. This is just so beyond outstanding. Love, Carol
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