He

HE

H idden beneath, words untold
E xisting as, my dreams unfold.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 6, 2009 at 10:39 AM
Yes. Brilliantly said. Thanks for the welcome! I like the soup!
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February 6, 2009 at 5:59 AM
A perfect acrostic set to a wonderful rhyme. Nicely done! Michael
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January 17, 2009 at 12:14 PM
Much said in just two lines. Creative use of the acrostic form. Nice job! I enjoyed it. Keep on writing. Karen
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January 14, 2009 at 10:26 PM
great write. i really enjoyed this short read. love and peace.-james
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January 13, 2009 at 5:20 PM
A neat ACROSTIC with a wonderful message... if you connected the H & E no one would know! Best wishes, Keith
Burton Avatar
January 13, 2009 at 10:25 AM
hshort powerful poetry. Thank you for your kind comments on my poetry and this was short, yet effective. have a blessed day.
Montgomery Avatar
January 13, 2009 at 9:29 AM
that's really good :)
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