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Hazed

The Gods have forsaken us his dark servants keep us in a haze in this forever darkness I cannot breathe he is killing us I can feel the chaos and hear the death He nears the Gods to tell about life his words fall on the Gods deaf ears the angels are falling from their burning haven He returns to an eternity of suffering I felt him finally become part of his own doing this hell that he started and could not fix I fear my end is near the haze is getting stronger stronger It hurts I am fading

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/3/2016 1:19:00 AM
Tosh Hortobagyi, enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *SKAT*
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Date: 10/28/2009 8:56:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Tas. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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