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Hazed

The Gods have forsaken us
his dark servants keep us in a haze
in this forever darkness I cannot breathe
he is killing us
I can feel the chaos
and hear the death

He nears the Gods 
to tell about life
his words fall on the Gods deaf ears
the angels are falling 
from their burning haven

He returns 
to an eternity of suffering 
I felt him finally become part of 
his own doing
this hell that he started and 
could not fix

I fear my end is near
the haze is getting stronger
stronger

It hurts
I am fading

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/3/2016 1:19:00 AM
Tosh Hortobagyi, enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *SKAT*
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Date: 10/28/2009 8:56:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Tas. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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