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Hazard

the troglodyte span
                      
                 scribbling doldrum brain power
      
                                   the halcyon days

allusionanalogypowerhaiku

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Victor Buhagiar

May 2, 2021 at 1:45 AM

Great thoughts which somehow are beyond me. I am more simple in my thoughts.

Sotto Poet

May 2, 2021 at 8:30 AM

Thanks, Dear Victor; poetry can mean so much more than just pretty words and pleasant imagery; it can capture and communicate emotions, perceptions, philosophies, ideas, and themes. Have a great day

David Kavanagh

May 1, 2021 at 2:46 PM

Wow what depth Lasaad, evolution or intelligence, a precarious balancing act one I tread and ponder everyday, are we the chosen ones, or just different, mind blowing writing, and a mind bending picture works perfectly, cheers David

Sotto Poet

May 1, 2021 at 3:02 PM

Thank you so much, David. In my view, life is becoming more fragile and unpredictable. With the great advances in evolutionary thinking, or if he's an utterly predictable soul; in my everyday life, I'm always struggling with nonsensical things.