Hawk Feeder

A hawk swoops past my
Feeder lengthening the food chain
On Sunflower birds
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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April 3, 2022 at 9:43 AM
Another strong image that centres your Haiku. You say much in 3 short lines. Best wishes, Brian
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