Hawk and Puny Birds

The hawk flies over
         in paralysing calmness       
           puny birds flutter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 4:06 PM
Hello alakas, the birds flutters because they are scard. Salute Darlene
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June 7, 2021 at 10:05 AM
Hello Alalkas, Salute Darlene. Enjoy your day my friend.
Poetry Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 5:23 PM
That is right.. scaring when Hawks fly observing victims... thank you dear salute alkas
Sands Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 6:48 AM
Great one. I can see it :)
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June 6, 2021 at 7:54 AM
Thank you dear Heidi for you lovely comment.. salute, alkas
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