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Hawk and Puny Birds

The hawk flies over in paralysing calmness puny birds flutter

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/6/2021 4:06:00 PM

Hello alakas, the birds flutters because they are scard. Salute Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/7/2021 10:05:00 AM

Hello Alalkas, Salute Darlene. Enjoy your day my friend.

Alkas Poetry
Date: 6/6/2021 5:23:00 PM

That is right.. scaring when Hawks fly observing victims... thank you dear salute alkas

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/6/2021 6:48:00 AM

Great one. I can see it :)

Alkas Poetry
Date: 6/6/2021 7:54:00 AM

Thank you dear Heidi for you lovely comment.. salute, alkas