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Hawaiian Life

Behold, the aura of evening sky colors fade to darkness, breathless. Hands, spent toiling and tilling, reap simple pleasure, and fingers begrimed. Passion of the island people grows, As upward the beast below boils. © Jul 21 2010 African Asset contest “sky, soil, and sea”

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Date: 9/13/2010 6:29:00 PM
Hi Charles. I lived in Hawaii for three years and you captured the spirit of the people and the land very well. I miss the sunsets there. Thanks Monica
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Date: 7/21/2010 6:50:00 AM
A wonderful theme you have chosen for the contest. Good luck
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Date: 7/21/2010 3:29:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this very descriptive and expressive write...I could just feel the volcano..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 7/20/2010 10:36:00 PM
lovely poem, good luck
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Date: 7/20/2010 10:34:00 PM
good luck charles, on your lovely poem C:
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