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Hawaii

The hot summer Sun Looking up when I run Across the shore I like to explore The big palm trees With big bumblebees Flying up high In the sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/15/2017 8:53:00 AM
The homeland of my mother :) You have given me such a peaceful picture of it.
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Gabriela Lewis
Date: 12/16/2017 6:09:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 11/26/2017 10:59:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem with lots of descriptive words I can just feel the scene.
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Gabriela Lewis
Date: 11/28/2017 1:32:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 11/26/2017 5:53:00 PM
I love this poem Gabriela...It's free... All the best to you
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Gabriela Lewis
Date: 11/28/2017 4:40:00 AM
You too!
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Gabriela Lewis
Date: 11/28/2017 1:33:00 AM
Thank you!

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