Having a Giggle

urgh What's that , Her tongue is in my mouth
What is she up to now , Her hands are going south.
Hey , Behave , My tone was so abrupt 
I'm a sweet and gentle virgin , Stop trying to corrupt.

I'm afraid she ignored me , Still exploring with her tongue
ooh She said , That's very nicely hung . 
Ouch , I cried , As she bit my bottom lip
I simply can't believe it , She's fiddling with my zip.

ooh says I , my eyes feel as if they may pop
What do you think you're doing , You've got 24 hours to stop.
30 seconds later, I still can't believe the things she's done
I've just lost my cherry and I'm only 21.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Babbit Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 5:13 PM
Naughty, naughty girls? Hang in there LOL
Nance Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 11:20 AM
This captured my attention, wondering where you are now and hoping you would return with your... inspired... writes x
Murray Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 4:11 AM
This kind of poem puts you straight into my favourites list Darren.
Davis Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 11:45 AM
Darren I blushed reading this. My poor virgin eyes and ears. LOL very creative and fun write. Thanks for the great comment on my Birthday poem.
Davis Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 11:44 AM
Darren I blushed reading this. My poor virgin eyes and ears. LOL very creative and fun write. Thanks for the great comment on my Birthday poem.
Collins Avatar
February 2, 2014 at 1:27 PM
What do you mean - just decided to have a little fun this morning. What are doing out there. Very innocent and funny poem love, Kathy
Watson Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 6:42 AM
It was raining hard and though I'm trying to build a fishpond with a waterfall , I need dry weather to do it , lol So I stayed indoors and played. Thank you for the comment.
Dietrich Avatar
February 1, 2014 at 10:10 PM
only 21. now that is a giggle THESE days. hahaha. I was 20 but had just gotten married!! Loved this.
Watson Avatar
February 2, 2014 at 10:32 AM
Only kidding , I'm still very pure really like most of us chaps , lol Thanks for the lovely comment , So pleased it gave you a giggle.
Mehta Avatar
February 1, 2014 at 4:30 AM
Very funny and humorous write, Darren
Watson Avatar
February 1, 2014 at 4:59 AM
Thank you Dr just felt like having a bit of fun this morning.
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