Havent You [to Emily Humphrey] 2-17-10

My heart has come to a stand still, 
the tears pain my eyes, 
i try to breath, 
to inhale, 
and the pain reminds me im alive. 
my soul so shattered in the dark, 
achs and reaches out to you. 
you know the pain ive felt, havent you?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 19, 2010 at 10:54 AM
Love it. Yes emily def knows how this is! Nice write.
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February 18, 2010 at 8:46 AM
wow rain I am sure that emily will like it that you are reaching out to her with this sad and yet beautiful poem, i really enjoyed it.=)Jo
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