Haven

I drink the bright sky,

I climbed the road of colors,
I entered through the roof of the empty house of 

wind,

I then entered at the feet of a rock,
I pass by the feet of the glittering

 and ancient sea.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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August 2, 2026 at 11:13 PM
Dear Asher, thank you for entering the contest. I like the way you have presented the pattern, 1 line with three lines to elaborate. I like the phrase, "For in solitude, the truth is clear" sometimes that alone time helps us to think more clearly on things. The theme if love is always an appealing choice too ✍️✨️🙂
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