Bette Bavington Poet Villanelle

Have You Seen the Mermaid Princess

This wonderful creature is a conqueress
Of the ships who sail the seven seas 
With blonde hair, blue eyes, and a die
For complexion she is leaving seamen
Questioning if she is what they saw or
Has their mind become undone?
She has been a success
Without being careless.
I would have to say she is no simpleton.
This wonderful creature is a conqueress
Who realized she is not powerless.
I really couldn't say when this legend 
Begun.
She has been a success
With finesse.
Really this is another one of those magical
Phenomenons.
This wonderful creature is a conqueress
Who is ageless.
She is the seas hon
Who has been a success.
So next time your out at sea look in to the
Secretiveness
You just might get to see a paragon.
This wonderful creature is a conqueress
Who has been a success.

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Jan Allison April 12, 2019 at 2:55 AM what a magical poem Bette:-) hugs Jan xx Bette Bavington April 12, 2019 at 9:21 AM Thank you.

Connie Marcum Wong April 8, 2019 at 10:11 PM Mermaids always enchant the spirit Bette. A lovely poem. : ) Bette Bavington April 9, 2019 at 2:09 PM Thank you.

Caren Krutsinger April 3, 2019 at 2:28 AM I am out on the seven seas, looking for this lovely conqueress now, Bette! She certainly is a success! Bette Bavington April 3, 2019 at 9:49 AM Thank you Caren. I hope you are having a good day.