Have You Got Your Party Ticket?

We all need a Savior
In this world today
Because to enter Heaven
There is no other way.

So a Savior God did send
Jesus His own Son
For He is salvation's gift,
Gift for every one.

So why don't you take this gift
Which money cannot buy
And receive from Him that ticket
For the banquet in the sky.

Go ahead book your seat
And take that party ticket
Don't let this pass you by
I would hate it if you miss it.

Let me warn you before I go
And let this thought sink in
Not all tickets that's out there
Are true and genuine.

So take this ticket God's own Son
This one's not a dud
Look closely and you will see
It's stamped with His own blood.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/5/2009 4:37:00 AM
Oh yes we need a ticket, and that ticket guarantee only one. On the buses i can by a day saver ticket and if i didn't use it all day i could pass it on to a freind family member or just some stranger. Not so with heaven.we must know God for our selves, and answer for our selves as well. In the same way Jesus is the only way. If mankind try to seek any other way, they are robbers and will get no way. very good poem Abe
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Date: 3/22/2009 7:23:00 AM
hi leon my friend thank you for your kind comments i love this poem of yours have you got your party ticket wow its just great God bless you and your family from john
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Date: 3/20/2009 10:36:00 AM
Wow, what a powerful statement at the end of this awesome poem, Leon! I just read HG's footle that is dedicated to you. You may sense the heartbreak, but you certainly don't let if fester within. This poem, like many of your others, offers great insight.
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Date: 3/17/2009 9:41:00 AM
This is a great write Leon. True, there's only one... one way ticket to heaven. I like the flow of this write and it sends a good message.
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Date: 3/16/2009 8:09:00 PM
Dear Leon, YOUR PEN , the Hand that holds it and the Mind that created this POEM are Blessed : Majestic Write ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/16/2009 7:24:00 PM
Awesome! The rhyme and flow are perfect and your words sing with the truth! Great job as always. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/16/2009 2:55:00 PM
Clever, upbeat, religious rhyme, I enjoyed reading this great new take on religion. well written rhyme, great imagery and flow, thanks for sharring, good work. Judy Riley
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Date: 3/16/2009 2:53:00 PM
Brilliant theme and imagery! It puts accross it's profound meassage very well indeed! Awesome write ~ Leander
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