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Have You Experienced?

Do not tell me you know how i feel my feelings do hurt and are horribly real have you experienced all the pain and the strife of the heart wrenching chapters that make up my life No you haven't as our lives are unique some happy, some funny and some are weak Day to day thoughts go through my head i only made one mistake today I GOT OUT OF BED! Things people tell me i find hard to believe because everyone who ever said ''ill be there'' just get up and leave so once again im left alone to deal with my existence all on my own As it is an existence not a life that i lead, can you not see the pain in these tears that i bleed I cant fake this smile for one minute more but ill carry on smiling as i have done before to keep people in the dark so they think im ok is what i will do then deal with things my way

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Date: 5/18/2009 8:24:00 PM
Dear Katie, Very Remarkable. YOU and I are of like HEARTS I can see the pain I feel the sadness in YOUR Tears Superb Rhyme ALWAYS,,,HG
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