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Have You Ever Heard Alouette

Sound poem. Have you ever been to a party? Do you listen to its sounds? The sound of children's laughter Ringing through the house, the sound of the meat sizzling on the BBQ,the thumping thud of children Running,the chatter of parents talking,the crackle Of dry leaves being trampled The ding of the doorbell As more people arrive,the crinkle and tear of presents being opened, the bark of the dog playing with the children, The sound of music echoing through the halls,the chirping of birds, the cry of a baby. Do you hear what I hear?

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Date: 8/30/2014 2:03:00 PM
Talicia You did a nice job with the description and imagery that I could actually hear the events happening and see it going on. Thank you for the nice comment on my Vampire poem. Glad I could inspire you.
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Date: 3/23/2015 3:39:00 AM
thanks, and no probs
Date: 8/19/2014 7:38:00 AM
Excellent description. I'm more of a loaner, so I would've entitled it "When Will They Leave?"....lol. Keep up the good work. I, for one, will keep reading your great poetry! Ttyl8r...
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Date: 8/14/2014 9:34:00 AM
Good Write, Keep it up and share your art, and it is funny and it seems interesting and exciting
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Date: 8/11/2014 7:26:00 AM
I sure hear it, just give me an address and i'm there. It sounds exciting than where I am at the moment.
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Date: 8/11/2014 7:37:00 AM
Lol, as soon as I find the place myself I'll give it to you
Date: 8/10/2014 9:02:00 AM
Yes I hear it very well, thanks to your description.
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Date: 8/10/2014 6:54:00 AM
Nicely done Talicia... Verlena
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Date: 8/10/2014 6:02:00 AM
Not bad at all....hugsTim
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Date: 8/10/2014 5:40:00 AM
I made a couple of mistakes but all in all I don't think its that bad..
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