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Constanza

The Constanza created by Connie Marcum Wong consists of five or more 3-line stanzas. Each line eight syllables. All the first lines of all the stanzas form an independent poem as the rest of the poem expresses a deeper meaning. The first lines are in mono-rhyme while the second and third lines of each stanza rhyme together. Rhyme scheme: a/b/b a/c/c a/d/d a/e/e a/f/f.........etc. And the end verse is made up of the first lines of all the previous verses combined.

 

Songbirds chirp praises to the sun; hidden in the leaves of the trees, while the air is abuzz with bees. In its race with Spring, Summer won; sweating in the sweltering heat as peonies bloom, smelling so sweet. The short days and long nights are done; in Summer's splendiferous light hatchlings fledge, preparing for flight. It's time to relax and have fun; go swimming or tan on the beach just keep some sunscreen within reach. Kick up your heels, go for a run; watch a friendly game of baseball or camp out; it'll soon be Fall. Songbirds chirp praises to the sun; in its race with Spring, Summer won. The short days and long nights are done; it's time to relax and have fun, kick up your heels; go for a run.

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Date: 6/21/2018 3:33:00 PM
Summer fun indeed, Emile. Well done.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/21/2018 4:21:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/21/2018 11:48:00 AM
Best enjoy it while we can, well done Emile...
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/21/2018 1:19:00 PM
Thanks Charlie, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/21/2018 8:47:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this fun poem today Emile :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/21/2018 10:17:00 AM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your warm comments my friend, Emile.

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