Have I Ever Told You That

HAVE I EVER TOLD YOU THAT… Have I ever told you that, my love belongs to you. Forever to the end of time, I’ve promised … to be true? Have I ever told you that, you’ve made my life worthwhile, Your wonderful sense of humor, has always made me … smile? Have I ever told you that, I don’t want to go away, But my life’s drawing to a close, with you … I cannot stay? Have I ever told that, I’m wondering when I’m gone. How soon you will forget me, to another one … belong? Copy write Nov.13, 2020 Contest sponsored by John Lawless ( computer went down too late to enter) Barbara Barry-Nishanian

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Sean Solomon

Date: 6/14/2021 3:53:00 PM

This one breaks my heart. You are truly gifted.

Greg Gaul

Date: 1/15/2021 6:39:00 AM

This is poignant and soulful. You must suffer but it is redeeming that you think to share.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 1/17/2021 4:51:00 PM

Hi Greg, thank you for visiting. Thankfully this isn't about me, but trying to imagine the painful situations that exist around us every day. Really appreciate encouragement, Poignant and soulful sounds great! Thank you so much!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/30/2020 7:28:00 AM

Oh, this is wonderfully written, Barabara. So poignant, tender, and then in the last two stanza, so utterly heart-rending. For me a topnotch FAVE. Thank you writing a brilliant poem and sharing it with us on the Soup. Peace and Serenity, Gershon

Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 12/30/2020 10:38:00 AM

Oh Wow! What encouragement. I can't believe how fantastic you just made me feel. Thank you Gershon so very much. I'm trying to write again, so thank you again. Stay well friend.

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 12/2/2020 3:45:00 AM

Have never told you- this is a wonderful beautiful verse. Thank you for all you do who creative crafts writet on write on Just lovely!! James

Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 12/3/2020 3:49:00 PM

Hi James, been a year since on PS. Thank you so much for your encouragement, as usual, it makes me feel great!!! Thank You, friend.

Silent One

Date: 11/15/2020 3:20:00 AM

I think you just told.. a lovely poem of dedication and commitment..

Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 11/15/2020 6:29:00 AM

You amaze me Silent One, how you know when I've posted and supported me with your kind words/. My computer quits on me and I couldn't get this in for the contest. But I'm trying to write again that what counts.