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Have I Ever Told You

have I ever told you that... a picture crystallized in my heart~ an evening, mesmerizing starlit sky,  two youngsters ~ ardently absorbed in each other. you narrated an entire story ~ with so much zeal~ a spellbound account of love and loss -  did not have slightest idea what loss really meant!  I was a captive listener!  what magic did you instill with your hypnotizing voice?  became a priceless memory I could never erase.  have I ever told you that ...I remember an evening of strolling back together by a desolate narrow village-street...from a favourite musical...  dark noiseless night.. stars mysteriously blinking... tall trees apprehensively watching, just the two of us... didn’t hold hands,  walking straight into the night...as if in a trance.. the sight never faded away!  have I ever told you that ...a miraculous evening ~ never slipped away in front of a mighty waterfalls, an undeniable witness of our bond,  raining uninterrupted...rain and the falls...flooded, drenched both of us, never witnessed pouring rain the way I did... my heart never pulsated like the way it did..,  a ruby-crowned kinglet crooned inside me,   heart leapt and almost burst with a sensation of craziest happiness,  rapt with profound sadness.. with the anticipation of losing you.   Reminiscences transformed into.... dreams~ one pearl gets found from thousands of seashells, found my pearls in the ocean of memories.  November 4, 2020 For "Have I Ever Told You That" Poetry Contest Sponsor: John Lawless

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Date: 11/13/2020 4:43:00 PM
Revisiting this favourite poem time and again..oh, dear Mala I simply love this poem!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/13/2020 5:33:00 PM
Dear JCB, you are a romantic poet. That's why this poem is your favourite! Mine too! Hugs, Mala
Date: 11/5/2020 9:34:00 PM
Oh what an enchanting poem dear Mala...I am mesmerized...I could feel the deep longings in each line...I have no words to say..but this just magical! A fave for me...A sure win!
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Date: 11/5/2020 3:26:00 AM
A lovely write Mala. Enjoyed reading. How wonderful you write! Keep the ink flowing. Looking forward to reading more of your poems everyday.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/5/2020 9:38:00 AM
Thank you so much, Rama. Delighted to know you enjoyed. Feel blessed! We are learning from each other. Love, Mala
Date: 11/5/2020 2:57:00 AM
I love that last line, this is a beautiful poem, full of lovely lines and I think you have told them now...
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/5/2020 9:42:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dear Poet. feel honoured and blessed with such inspiring comments from you. I have told now....in my poem. Best wishes, Mala

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