Have I Ever Told You

have I ever told you that... a picture crystallized in my heart~
an evening, mesmerizing starlit sky, 
two youngsters ~ ardently absorbed in each other.
you narrated an entire story ~ with so much zeal~
a spellbound account of love and loss -  did not have slightest idea what loss really meant! 
I was a captive listener! 
what magic did you instill with your hypnotizing voice? 
became a priceless memory I could never erase. 

have I ever told you that ...I remember an evening of strolling back together
by a desolate narrow village-street...from a favourite musical... 
dark noiseless night.. stars mysteriously blinking...
tall trees apprehensively watching,
just the two of us... didn’t hold hands, 
walking straight into the night...as if in a trance..
the sight never faded away! 

have I ever told you that ...a miraculous evening ~ never slipped away
in front of a mighty waterfalls, an undeniable witness of our bond, 
raining uninterrupted...rain and the falls...flooded, drenched both of us,
never witnessed pouring rain the way I did...
my heart never pulsated like the way it did.., 
a ruby-crowned kinglet crooned inside me,  
heart leapt and almost burst with a sensation of craziest happiness, 
rapt with profound sadness.. 
with the anticipation of losing you.  

Reminiscences transformed into.... dreams~

one pearl gets found from thousands of seashells, found my pearls in the ocean of memories. 

          
                                    November 4, 2020
                        For "Have I Ever Told You That" Poetry Contest
                                  Sponsor: John Lawless

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 11/13/2020 4:43:00 PM
Revisiting this favourite poem time and again..oh, dear Mala I simply love this poem!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/13/2020 5:33:00 PM
Dear JCB, you are a romantic poet. That's why this poem is your favourite! Mine too! Hugs, Mala
Date: 11/5/2020 9:34:00 PM
Oh what an enchanting poem dear Mala...I am mesmerized...I could feel the deep longings in each line...I have no words to say..but this just magical! A fave for me...A sure win!
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Date: 11/5/2020 3:26:00 AM
A lovely write Mala. Enjoyed reading. How wonderful you write! Keep the ink flowing. Looking forward to reading more of your poems everyday.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/5/2020 9:38:00 AM
Thank you so much, Rama. Delighted to know you enjoyed. Feel blessed! We are learning from each other. Love, Mala
Date: 11/5/2020 2:57:00 AM
I love that last line, this is a beautiful poem, full of lovely lines and I think you have told them now...
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/5/2020 9:42:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dear Poet. feel honoured and blessed with such inspiring comments from you. I have told now....in my poem. Best wishes, Mala
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