Haunting of the Heart

Bloody as can be
The blade that pierced me
So close to the heart 
A wound that will make me fall apart
Her fragrance of I'm aware
The fake cries of her despair
Come they do emotions numb
For which I will not Succumb
Tears held in mine eyes
I hold back so she can't see me cry
Dismal is thoughts of love again
Maybe next time I shall win
Rose colored glass as solace worn
Hold me over until I no longer morn

3/29/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 8:34 AM
Hello Michael Craig, when a love goes wrong it is painful. It takes time to heal. What goes around comes around. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Craig Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 1:15 PM
Thanks for taking the time to read my entry and the congratulations. - Silent one
One Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 7:37 AM
I see this is full of sadness... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Craig Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 1:40 PM
Thanks for taking the time to read my entry and for the congratulations. - Silent One
Craig Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 11:48 AM
CayCay, I so look forward to your critic of my work. Thank you so much.
Godwin Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 9:50 AM
Straight to my heart where I hold the pain of my own unrequited love. Though it was long ago and I've made friends with it, the heart does hold it and your emotional lines woke it so poetically awake. A heartbreak delivered in wonderful ink! Oh, so good. Thanks for the uplifting message, Michael. I love this one. CayCay (form is rhyme)
Ashley Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 8:27 PM
Your poem expresses the sadness of lost love so intimately and beautifully, Michael. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Craig Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 12:32 PM
Susan, thank you for the congratulations and for the warmest wishes. - Mike
Roper Avatar
April 18, 2019 at 10:06 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in Laura's contest. Have a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`*
Craig Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 12:34 PM
I'm a little late with the thank you. Hope you had a wonderful Easter. - Mike
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 9:58 PM
The highs and lows of love can be blissful or devastating. Most of us can relate. Poignant and well expressed Michael. Congratulations on your win! Aloha, Connie
Craig Avatar
April 18, 2019 at 12:18 PM
Thank you, Connie. The poem you entered was most beautiful. Congratulations on your first place win most deserved.
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