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Haunted Places

Vaporous forms adrift through cold dark rooms Are remnants of passing that in this life looms, And I’ve felt the touch that this dread embraces While wandering about in haunted places. Disembodied voices resounding in empty halls And those that whisper from ancient walls; O’ I’ve heard these spectres that time displaces Where gloom has gathered in haunted places! Empty footfalls and floorboards creaking, The lamenting wind and women weeping, Children singing in vacant spaces, I’ve heard these things in haunted places. I’ve seen the dungeon’s mist as midnight falls, I’ve seen the ghastly events that time recalls, I’ve seen the airy forms that relive disgraces, O’ these things I know of haunted places! Embittered wailing and inhuman screaming Have awakened me when I was dreaming. O’ from the darkness the dead come creeping Upon the night, for they are not sleeping. Wailing spirits from times amiss, Wander about, O’ I have witnessed this, For these fitful souls without earthly graces Are forever kept in haunted places! I’ve been touched by hands where there were none From unseemly acts and deeds undone, By murder, by mayhem, there are always traces, That lurk about in haunted places.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/8/2018 1:51:00 PM
What a great first poem Robert. This was well worth looking back at.
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R. L. Mccallum
Date: 1/8/2018 3:25:00 PM
Thank you, Richard.
Date: 12/11/2015 8:25:00 PM
Clever rhyming of '-ace' words in your first four verses, and I knew the phrase '...for they are not sleeping' would creep in somewhere. Brilliant phrasing and powerful imagery. SUPERB! Best wishes, Keith (PS Let me be late in welcoming you to the Soup. You have an impressive body of work.)
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R. L. Mccallum
Date: 12/11/2015 10:00:00 PM
Thanks, Keith. Happy to be here among the other poets of the 21st century.
Date: 11/17/2015 10:15:00 PM
Robert :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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R. L. Mccallum
Date: 11/17/2015 10:30:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 10/28/2015 10:19:00 PM
Hi Robert, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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R. L. Mccallum
Date: 10/28/2015 10:33:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. I'm looking forward to meet other poets and to read their poems.
Date: 10/27/2015 10:04:00 PM
Robert, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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R. L. Mccallum
Date: 10/27/2015 10:43:00 PM
Hello; thanks for the greeting. I'm sure I'll love this site and all the poets within.

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