Haunted House


Once lost in Himalayan forest I spotted a house bare,
before the nightfall I could hurriedly walk up to there.
I knocked the door, an old man let me in a room stale 
that greeted me with smoke of a dim lantern to inhale.

His curled lips quivered, saying faintly, “you need food”,
closed the door swiftly and disappeared into solitude.
As he didn’t return, I looked up, saw a streak of light
in a room where I found him stone still, sitting upright.

He clutched a human skeleton, I was terrified to see.
He said, “this friend is old, a new one you will give me”.
Cold sweat rolled down my spine, shivering in the core,
I ran out of the haunted house through the back door.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kitchin Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 3:49 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your first place win with your spooktacular spooky poem. Nicely done.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 8:58 PM
Thank you, Tania for the placement.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 7:55 AM
Great spooky story! You draw us in with a great opener and leave us running out the back door. Well done, my friend!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 10:19 AM
Thank you so much, Kim.
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