Haunted House

Creeping, crawling, braying, bawling
What’s that sound inside my wall?
Scratching, grasping, voices rasping
Through the door I shakily crawl.

Heavy breathing, gasping, writhing
Something grasps and pulls me in.
Screaming, I am somehow diving
Into unknown worlds within.

Shapes and figures make me shiver
What’s this hell that I have found?
Down the dark black Styx, the river
I am floating, now hell-bound.

I am gone from Earth forever
No one knows where I have gone.
Burn the house down so that never
House traps victims, Devil’s pawns. 

10/5/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kitchin Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 2:33 PM
Linda, congratulations on your winning placement with your spooky haunted house poem, great imagery!
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 12:49 PM
Very creepy indeed love the flow of the poem and rhyme, many congrats on your win Linda:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 8:10 PM
Love the phrasing, 'Styx, the river.' Sounds like it's time to get ready for Halloween again. Thanks, Gershon
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