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Haunted By a Long Lost Love

Haunted by a long- lost love, searching the heavens up above my lover is all I can dream of. The gilded leaves of Autumn sigh as his eyes close to say goodbye; I kiss his lips and pray as I cry. On a passing cloud there floats a dream, as I see him fishing downstream with the Lord by his side he is seen. Silhouettes in Moonlight, dancing to the sounds of the night as the autumn turns into winter gleaming lights. The soft song of a Summer Breeze, jasmine nodding leaves mingle in the trees, my lover is all I can think of as I fall to my knees. 9/17/2018

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Date: 9/27/2018 12:21:00 PM
Beautifully crafted. Well done. I truly enjoyed this.
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Date: 9/21/2018 11:56:00 AM
Heartfelt my friend...haunting memories...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 9/20/2018 7:15:00 PM
this is very beautiful, Eve. Hauntingly so.
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Date: 9/19/2018 5:02:00 AM
In loss we are always haunted.... deep emotive poetry Eve..
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Date: 9/18/2018 8:58:00 PM
floating dreams... i love this write Eve, i suspect many people have these dreams from our past. lovely
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Date: 9/18/2018 5:39:00 PM
eve, i'm liking the nostalgic tone of this beautiful work...splendidly expressed...huggs
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Date: 9/18/2018 10:43:00 AM
This is a beautifully sad poem that speaks to the heart. Though there is a hint of sorrow there is also the feel of a joyful and almost happy vision knowing that this person is safe and doing what they love. Nicely expressed Eve.
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Date: 9/18/2018 9:12:00 AM
Beautiful one interweaving all the phrases, Eve:) you have a wonderful winner here:)
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Date: 9/18/2018 7:39:00 AM
This is such a sweet and powerful poem Eve. Your love will always be with you xxoo
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Date: 9/18/2018 6:43:00 AM
The last three lines have touched my heart. What a fine theme of love, care and prayer. I believe that love is really a great feeling; but unfortunately I never got a chance to experience it. But I know that it will be far different from my imagination. A very beautiful poem… take care Eve….
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Date: 9/18/2018 3:12:00 AM
Beautiful images, Eve with tinges of both deep sadness and hope. Best wishes Wendy
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Date: 9/18/2018 12:42:00 AM
Oh my, this too so wonderful Eve, I can feel the emotions in this!
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Date: 9/18/2018 12:15:00 AM
A lovely verse and dedication Eve. Tom
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