Haunted

His agonized inhabited mind haunted 
by peaceless imaginative thought,
extremely distressed, his spirit daunted 
with severe revelations of supernatural 
phenomenon, so distorted caricatural
features indescribable by the untaught,

exorcism perceived as emotional relief 
for his tormented mind created by him,
comforted by his faith and strong belief 
miraculous event now urgently desired 
penance to alleviate his guilt  required,
tormented by ghostly sight of his victim.

4/1/2018

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/1/2018 12:27:00 PM

what a stunningly vivid write slaying your dragons, roy... much enjoyed!..huggs

Roy Pett
Date: 4/1/2018 2:41:00 PM

Thank you so much nette for your very kind comment, so pleased you enjoyed my poem, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))

FJ Thomas

Date: 4/1/2018 10:33:00 AM

Wow wonderful wonderful take on the theme options Roy!

Roy Pett
Date: 4/1/2018 11:21:00 AM

Thank you Shadow for your very kind comment, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/1/2018 6:36:00 AM

Great verse Roy, about someone struggling with his inner demons. Good luck. Happy Easter. Tom

Roy Pett
Date: 4/1/2018 6:39:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Tom, wishing you and yours a happy Easter my friend. :))