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Haunted

While checking out a supposedly haunted house I made my way down into a crypt-like cellar. All I could hear was the scurrying of a mouse, but it felt spooky, as though the shadows had eyes. And I wasn't so sure my being here was wise, this decrepit old house might still have a dweller. All the other kids warned me to stay far away, vehemently swearing screams were heard late at night. I thought I'd be safe in the middle of the day, but I can sense an evil presence lurking here. And my pounding heart's pumping fast, fueled by fear as I run and don't stop till it's well out of sight. (Rhyme) 3/30/2018

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Date: 5/6/2018 10:30:00 AM
LOL - delightful poem, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/6/2018 1:34:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/30/2018 10:02:00 PM
Nicely done, Emile, luck in the contest. Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/31/2018 7:40:00 AM
Thanks Eve, your comments and support are truly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/30/2018 6:09:00 PM
My oh my! Brave kid. I'd still be running though. lol A fun poem and would be a great entry for a children's book. Good luck in the contest. :D
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/31/2018 7:40:00 AM
Thanks Carole, your comments and support are truly appreciated my friend, Emile.

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