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The smell of cherries, stem and all, sours the quiescence of the room. An ethereal tongue midair, lilting with laughter, daunting and petty. Crushed, he turns the opposite of robust red - this poisonous groom, Realizing he’s released the bloodroot from the bottomless pit of hell. Tortured for his life’s eternity, he will remain under her vengeful spell. With wickedness of a serpent-bride, venom in her veins - a pitiless betty. The softness of her skin, golden wheat hair, rich and honey sweet. A treasure he’d wear for a while, whilst a murderous plot he’d kindle. He’d not counted on this country mouse developing skills to cheat. Thus he plotted a slow and painful death with plenipotentiary pain. His Eve, he’d drive her body with arsenic, until she’d go insane. ~ Nettles of incremental hours, the widower’s squeals ne’er dwindle. ~ 3/28/2018 Laura Loo’s Rhyme Time 1 Contest

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Date: 3/29/2018 5:48:00 AM
Country mouse developing the skills to cheat. As a country mouse that line really stung but what a wonderful diabolical poem Kim. Exciting in every way.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/29/2018 5:55:00 AM
Thanks, Caren! I may be a country mouse or a suburban souse...lol...something like that. But not at all like this! Thanks so much, Caren!
Date: 3/28/2018 3:24:00 PM
Wow- what a write, Kim! " a pitiless betty" is fabulous xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/29/2018 5:56:00 AM
Thanks so much, Mike!

Book: Shattered Sighs