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Hauki 4

A simple daisy
yet  exquisitely formed
white and gold abound


My blackbird follows
me around in the garden
cheerful tune emits


snowdrop  so lovely
you poke up your head through snow
 glistening snow white


a robin redbreast
tugged at a juicy worm
he was so pleased

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/19/2013 4:56:00 PM

Reads as if one is in early spring...Enjoyed reading your Haiku...Thanks for stopping by..That was one smashed rattler..That morning there were two armadillos and a rattlesnake in the road dead..The buzzards had a choice of which restaurant they would dine that day..Sara

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/20/2013 11:36:00 AM

lol sounds gruesome ty Sara spring would fit well Shadow x smiles

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/19/2013 9:58:00 AM

I think Mother Nature is bowing in your dedications to her today. Gorgeous job!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/19/2013 4:48:00 PM

hi Drake what a lovely thought nice to see you stopping in Shadow x smiles