Robert Sebastian Poet Narrative

Hatred So Strong

I know what I must do
To survive this unlucky day
I must take control of my anger
Then the hate will go away
But what if it doesn't work
What will happen then
I don't know but when I do
All the hate will end...

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Derrick Burton December 12, 2009 at 3:34 PM short and powerful... really enjoyed the self taught lesson in this poetry, I also enjoyed the ending as well, loved and have a great weekend. :):)

Audrey Haick December 4, 2009 at 10:24 AM Believe me, Robert, it doesn't work! Hate is poison-you know how you feel all over. Leave the baggage as life is tough enough. Good write though. Soup Mail!

Carolyn Devonshire December 4, 2009 at 8:18 AM Turning our backs on hatred is the way to go, Robert. It's not always easy, but once it's accomplished there is a welcome sense of peace. Peace be with you this holiday season! Love, Carolyn