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Hatred So Strong

I know what I must do To survive this unlucky day I must take control of my anger Then the hate will go away But what if it doesn't work What will happen then I don't know but when I do All the hate will end...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 12/12/2009 3:34:00 PM
short and powerful... really enjoyed the self taught lesson in this poetry, I also enjoyed the ending as well, loved and have a great weekend. :):)
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Date: 12/4/2009 10:24:00 AM
Believe me, Robert, it doesn't work! Hate is poison-you know how you feel all over. Leave the baggage as life is tough enough. Good write though. Soup Mail!
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Date: 12/4/2009 8:18:00 AM
Turning our backs on hatred is the way to go, Robert. It's not always easy, but once it's accomplished there is a welcome sense of peace. Peace be with you this holiday season! Love, Carolyn
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