Hatred

Hatred is terrible,
Hatred is cruel,
Hatred is something that we just shouldn't do.
Like a horrid uncontrollable fiery blaze,
It starts from a nasty word, action or phrase.
Then grows bigger and bigger in might, 
Then ones hatred turns to despite.
Till someone steps in with goodness and light,
To end this horrible hatred filled fight.
So please stop hatred and let forgiveness in your heart,
At least then you will know that you have made a start.

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Skat A

Date: 7/26/2015 12:03:00 AM

ALISHA:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Alisha Hendrick
Date: 7/26/2015 12:20:00 AM

Thank you so much SKAT I cannot believe it has been 2 years since I started poetry soups with this poem, I'm so happy with the views and feedback from everyone, especially a big thanks to you SKAT for being one of my earliest fans on here

Ken Jordan

Date: 7/21/2015 10:22:00 PM

Alisha, no truer words have ever been spoken, let's stop hatred! Great poem. Stay strong Ken

Alisha Hendrick
Date: 7/21/2015 10:28:00 PM

Thanks so much

Edward Snyder

Date: 7/21/2015 5:24:00 PM

Nice truthful, well written, ryme.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 6/27/2013 4:53:00 PM

Hi Alisha Congratulations on your win. Welcome to Poetry Soup. SuZ

Donna Jones

Date: 6/26/2013 5:08:00 PM

I loved your poem....congratulations on your win...great message!

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 6/20/2013 4:13:00 PM

Alisha congratulations on your excellent. Win a great message in your poem. Welcome to PS. I look forward in reading more of your poems. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/20/2013 1:57:00 PM

Alisha ;-) Congratulations!!! Thank you for entering one of my latest contest. please enjoy all the other winners who took their time in entering the same contest you did. you can find the list on the -Contest Winners: Member area- or you can visit my newest blog called ""from HEART to HEART ..."" stop by if you like. always & forever *LINDA

Alisha Hendrick

Date: 6/19/2013 4:14:00 PM

Thank you everyone for your wonderful feedback I am so Happy that you enjoy my poem, I will submit more this weekend.

Skat A

Date: 6/19/2013 8:20:00 AM

A very powerful and thought provoking poem, Alisha, , Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Alisha Hendrick
Date: 6/19/2013 4:15:00 PM

thanks SKAT lovely to meet you too. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/19/2013 5:23:00 AM

Hey, Alisha ! - Pleased to read your first poem in the P-Soup! - You write very well. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us :) - Here it is: give to get, comments - then you will get feedback on your writing - I love get feedback on what I write. - Wish you luck my "new friend" - Have fun with poetry! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/18/2013 9:13:00 AM

i understand being mad at someone but yes hatred is such a terrible thing to have on anyone, enjoyed your write Alisha, ~always, Linda