Timothy Brumley Poet Senryu

Hatred

Hatred is a worm,

                           That eats from the inside out...

                                                                      Leaving you hollow.




                                                                      Timothy I. Brumley

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Funom Makama June 11, 2012 at 4:28 AM This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 22, 2010 at 8:24 PM Timothy we need a poster board sign with these word on it.. big and bold.. perfect..my friend.. and your blog was great .. and i left a comment..I hope u enjoy.. and gotta go now as my LUV is here for the weekend... see u on Soup tomorrow.. with luv..

Andrea Dietrich July 10, 2010 at 10:11 AM You have many "truisms" here!

Joseph Spence Sr July 2, 2010 at 5:42 PM Dude!!! Man you're right on the money. I just love it, right down to the core. Tell them about love in your next one. Great job! Joseph

Carolyn Devonshire July 2, 2010 at 10:15 AM And an ugly worm it is, Timothy. You describe that "hollow" feeling very well in your senryu. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta July 2, 2010 at 8:42 AM A nice Senryu with fine thought

Poet Destroyer A July 1, 2010 at 8:29 PM how true this is,, enjoyed your write..P.D.