Hatred

Her eyes burning with hate
Anger fills her soul
Trying to help her will
Result in nothing but confusion
Everyone take notice in this:
Doomed is the soul satan dwells in
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Loveless Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 5:25 AM
I agree with Brandy. also, i tend to be filled with much anger, this makes me wonder if in these lines "anger fills her soul....doomed is the soul Satan dwells in" you mean that those filled with anger, are in a way taken by evil? hmm, it just makes me think. nice Job. Jese
Al-Riyami Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 7:05 AM
Hatred is another powerfull subject in poetry.This poem is a great success in establishing that.Good:)
Megens Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 2:48 PM
YES BUT YOU CAN REBUKE HIM YOU ARE YOUR STRONGEST AND WEAKEST POINT
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