Hatred

Her eyes burning with hate Anger fills her soul Trying to help her will Result in nothing but confusion Everyone take notice in this: Doomed is the soul satan dwells in

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Jay Loveless

Date: 5/21/2009 5:25:00 AM

I agree with Brandy. also, i tend to be filled with much anger, this makes me wonder if in these lines "anger fills her soul....doomed is the soul Satan dwells in" you mean that those filled with anger, are in a way taken by evil? hmm, it just makes me think. nice Job. Jese

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 5/20/2009 7:05:00 AM

Hatred is another powerfull subject in poetry.This poem is a great success in establishing that.Good:)

Brandy Megens

Date: 5/19/2009 2:48:00 PM

YES BUT YOU CAN REBUKE HIM YOU ARE YOUR STRONGEST AND WEAKEST POINT