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disdain and desire. I struck a bug and gave it. to a mosquito

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Date: 6/1/2021 6:52:00 AM
I get this... I have done this... I admit... Well written.. Captured just the right mood. Ann
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Date: 6/1/2021 7:47:00 AM
Thank you for your pleasing response, Ann, for the lovely comment. Blessings and regards
Date: 6/1/2021 3:19:00 AM
The greatest killer in history to mankind, is the malarial carrying mosquito, so it’s about time we gave them some payback Lasaad, and the vengeance shown here in your humorous haiku, is just what is needed, very clever, cheers David
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Date: 6/1/2021 3:41:00 AM
Thank you for your pleasing response, David, I'm really gratified that you enjoyed this poem. Thanks for the lovely comment. Blessings and regards
Date: 5/30/2021 12:12:00 PM
Interesting work. I am not found of the insect world but I know they are needed but the mosquito I could do without. Enjoyed reading this one and the lovely snapshot. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 5/30/2021 12:20:00 PM
Thanks, Sara, for your generous visit. In the following haiku, I will let the bug eat the mosquito:) just kidding, Sara. Have a blessed day.
Date: 5/30/2021 12:03:00 PM
I always love reading your poems.
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Date: 5/30/2021 12:16:00 PM
Thanks, Alex, that's so nice of you.
Date: 5/30/2021 1:26:00 AM
Oh please. Kill the mosquito too. Their bite is painful enough.
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Date: 5/30/2021 12:16:00 PM
:) ok, dear friend, it's safe now the mosquito is gone
Date: 5/29/2021 7:09:00 PM
WoW! Feeling a little testy are we? Cute one my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/30/2021 12:14:00 PM
Thanks for your visit Judy, have a blessed one
Date: 5/29/2021 5:56:00 PM
Amusing and witty, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Blessings.
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Date: 5/29/2021 6:26:00 PM
Thanks for the wonderful comment, and for your kind support. Blessings
Date: 5/29/2021 4:01:00 PM
Hello Lassad Tayeb, thank you for the laughter. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/30/2021 11:53:00 AM
Hello Tayeb, it is good to laugh I will. You enjoy your time to.
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Date: 5/29/2021 4:07:00 PM
You're welcome, Darlene, and I'm happy to put a smile on your face. Enjoy your time.