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Hatred

disdain and desire.

                                        I struck a bug and gave it.

                                    to a mosquito

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Sarah Omrane

February 14, 2024 at 2:38 PM

I love it!

Ann Foster

June 1, 2021 at 6:52 AM

I get this... I have done this... I admit... Well written.. Captured just the right mood. Ann

Sotto Poet

June 1, 2021 at 7:47 AM

Thank you for your pleasing response, Ann, for the lovely comment. Blessings and regards

David Kavanagh

June 1, 2021 at 3:19 AM

The greatest killer in history to mankind, is the malarial carrying mosquito, so it’s about time we gave them some payback Lasaad, and the vengeance shown here in your humorous haiku, is just what is needed, very clever, cheers David

Sotto Poet

June 1, 2021 at 3:41 AM

Thank you for your pleasing response, David, I'm really gratified that you enjoyed this poem. Thanks for the lovely comment. Blessings and regards

Sara Kendrick

May 30, 2021 at 12:12 PM

Interesting work. I am not found of the insect world but I know they are needed but the mosquito I could do without. Enjoyed reading this one and the lovely snapshot. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Sotto Poet

May 30, 2021 at 12:20 PM

Thanks, Sara, for your generous visit. In the following haiku, I will let the bug eat the mosquito:) just kidding, Sara. Have a blessed day.