Hatred

The names you say
The       you play
Just go a different way
What if this could all disapear
I wish it would come and bite you in the rear

This      I feel inside 
Is very wide
It's like a rushing tide
All this hatred
Just fills my veins

angstconfusionrhyme

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Ian Petch

December 16, 2008 at 4:42 PM

I'm 21... just been randomly going through ur poetry anyways, lotsa hate and lotsa love... but always passionate, so it's all gud :P it's all subjective anyways, so there's never such thing is good poetry, as the poem is only as gud as the person thats reading it can relate to. my first poems were always angry anyway, though I found a lot more focus and control with my emotions as I had more practice... which is always handy in life :P