Hate Me

one of those days when I see me as you do, 
that clueless blank simpleton so far removed, 
suicidal thoughts thinking short sharp and crude 
if this is halfway then I've done what I choose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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August 15, 2021 at 10:56 AM
Hello Nick Trim, A poem with strong words. Enjoy your day my friend.
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August 15, 2021 at 10:41 AM
Strong poem. I'd really like if you read my last poem posted just now.... Thank you for this piece.
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