Hate Dad

i hate mom,
i hate dad more,
dad met mom
and thought he'd score
mom was desprete,
dad was a whore,
they got married, 
and my heart, it tore.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Palli Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 10:30 AM
can feel the anguish
Lusha Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 12:59 PM
short not sweet can feel the anger and pain in this ...good piece...Allie
Chubs Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 8:22 PM
Hello bree. Well im super glad you didnt actuallly leave.Had me going with that "im done' poem haha. And i love the comments!! Thankyou soo much!! read my latest one hope you dont mind the mentioning of your name in it. oh and btw before i forgeet i like your write in this one its very angsty and real.
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