Granola Bars Poet Couplet

Hate

Washed away sitting in my bedroom 
Windows sit open flowers can't bloom

Endless procedures continue to resume
Can't live a normal life with a dirty room

Watch my mind begin to sit and unfold
Logic doesn't matter so I catch a cold

Forget to shower again today
Self hate takes over and I fade away

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Sara Kendrick June 23, 2013 at 6:00 PM Sad lines that you have penned..I hope just a write about the topic of feeling depressed and not about your life..Sara Granola Bars June 23, 2013 at 9:58 PM I take this as a compliment. I'll eventually write something about the sole fact of being in depression. Don't worry. Thank you, Sara.