Hate

Hell seemed to encompass me
As this emotion manifested within
Time, though, has distinguished the fire
Enriching my soul again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 28, 2011 at 9:54 AM
Dear Laura, You are a great Lexographer "Time, though, has (distinguished) the fire Instead of (extinguished) therefore the line "Enriching my soul again" is much more enhanced, Superb Pen with LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry
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July 1, 2011 at 6:16 PM
I think it's great the reprieve that time can bring.
Carlson Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 7:16 AM
I loved this one too...I HATE HATE!...wait...what...damn it - Kyle
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July 1, 2011 at 5:02 AM
Time and good thoughts will do that for us Laura !!! enjoyed , Anne
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