Hate

H ate is a nasty word
A lmost often used to hurt
T ry forgiveness being
E vil Evolves Emptiness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chachere Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 9:22 PM
so powerful in such a small poem. if one holds a grudge to the point where it is pointless, and then all they show is anger to hide what they want and that they trul want to forgive, they just don't know how.and thats why they are empty and feel so cold.great meaning in this one. -Always&Forever Lynette
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 3:53 AM
Excellent writing, Faleshia. I especially like the last line. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Harlan Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 7:53 AM
I love it! Very well done
Dufresne Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 8:49 PM
Now ain't that just the truth, Faleshia. I guess we all get into it sometimes but it sure is a hurtful thing. Good acrostic with message.-Robert
Trevino Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 2:23 PM
all you wrote is true.. enjoyed
Pickett Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 11:39 AM
NICE.... My favorite form, The Acrostic..... I have many types.... Acrostic & End- line, Double-sided Acrostic, Etc....... Great job my friend.....:JP]
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