Hate

You look pathetic, begging like a dog for attention
Stop looking at me with apprehension
Don't look so sick
That knife in my back is just a prick
Do you recognize it? You put it there
You should put a big sign up that says BEWARE
Come any further and I'll tear your life to shreds
And leave your sanity hanging on by threads
Because, after all, it's true
Homewrecking is what you do
I wish I could have seen past your burning eyes
To reveal all your lies
But conning is your game
Fake is your name
Oh, I'm sorry. Am I offending you?
What a degrading conclusion I've come to
Do forgive me, I forgot you were a god
Do forgive me, I find it a little odd
That you walk around like you own the world
But dear, you don't own this girl
It's a pity how you used to dance and laugh
But now your words speak only on the devil's behalf
Don't flatter yourself and think that I miss you or your pathetic ways
Don't think that I miss walking through your tangled maze
Of lies, malice, and deceit
Because now that you're gone, I feel complete
I'm sorry if this hurts you, I really really do.
Maybe you can go cry to your new girlfriend, and your old ones too
That is, if they still acknowledge you
And if they can see past the things that I see through
Don't worry, I'll be just fine without you hun
You're so full of it and I'm so done
There's no excuse for how you behave
And when you die, I'll be helping them dig your grave.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/13/2009 11:43:00 AM
Deep. I'm feelin that!!
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Date: 6/13/2009 8:19:00 AM
There is not a woman alive who hasn't felt this at some time in their lives. You have such a gift for using words that conveying the gut wrenching feeling that comes from love lost, heart broken. Keep on writing - some of the best poetry comes from our dark places!
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