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Hastened Bliss

Time evaporates,
And seems to be a quick blur:
When I am with you.

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Doris Culverhouse

March 15, 2010 at 5:33 AM

poof is right, where does it go to ? just poof!!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

March 14, 2010 at 4:43 AM

And that's love, too. Smiles to Raul! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Brian Strand

March 13, 2010 at 11:52 PM

Thank you for the valued honour you have givn to my poem Raul.Rgds Brian

March 13, 2010 at 7:02 PM

It's amazing the truth in your words when one finds true love. You say so much in just three lines. Keep up the good writing! Soup mail. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

March 13, 2010 at 5:06 PM

What a lovely one for a special someone, RAul, and thanks so much for the placement in your contest, Luv, Andrea

Carrie Richards

March 13, 2010 at 4:13 PM

Now, if that isn't the most romantic thing I've ever heard! This is a terrific senryu! Anyone would melt to hear such words! :) ........... Many thanks Raul, for my HM in your last contest...it's made me smile! Thank you too, for always sponsoring wonderful contests with amazing photos! Love, Carrie

John Beam

March 13, 2010 at 4:04 PM

thanks first for congrats and thanks challenges great picture

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 13, 2010 at 3:09 PM

Luv knows not time or boundaries Raul as u have so captured in your lines of Senryu.. thankxxx so much for the HM on Hallowed Heart ..it was an especially nice contest to create a poem for and it served a two fold purpose for me also writing Sentiments of the Heart from your contest inspiration as well as your own words... appreciate the honor with luv... Linda-Marie..