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Hastened Bliss

Time evaporates, And seems to be a quick blur: When I am with you.

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/15/2010 5:33:00 AM

poof is right, where does it go to ? just poof!!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/14/2010 4:43:00 AM

And that's love, too. Smiles to Raul! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Brian Strand

Date: 3/13/2010 11:52:00 PM

Thank you for the valued honour you have givn to my poem Raul.Rgds Brian

Date: 3/13/2010 7:02:00 PM

It's amazing the truth in your words when one finds true love. You say so much in just three lines. Keep up the good writing! Soup mail. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2010 5:06:00 PM

What a lovely one for a special someone, RAul, and thanks so much for the placement in your contest, Luv, Andrea

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/13/2010 4:13:00 PM

Now, if that isn't the most romantic thing I've ever heard! This is a terrific senryu! Anyone would melt to hear such words! :) ........... Many thanks Raul, for my HM in your last contest...it's made me smile! Thank you too, for always sponsoring wonderful contests with amazing photos! Love, Carrie

John Beam

Date: 3/13/2010 4:04:00 PM

thanks first for congrats and thanks challenges great picture

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/13/2010 3:09:00 PM

Luv knows not time or boundaries Raul as u have so captured in your lines of Senryu.. thankxxx so much for the HM on Hallowed Heart ..it was an especially nice contest to create a poem for and it served a two fold purpose for me also writing Sentiments of the Heart from your contest inspiration as well as your own words... appreciate the honor with luv... Linda-Marie..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/13/2010 3:07:00 PM

Great short amore write..Keep the romantic pen flowing. Sara