Audrey Haick Poet Rhyme

Harvest Moon Looming

Harvest Moon you seem to loom                     
And peer at will into my room                              
Like a magnet you pull me in
Hypnotized I’m lost within

Shimmering stardust... raining
Burst of golden flecks, sailing
Harvest Moon you seem to loom
And peer at will into my room

7/14/13

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Robert Lindley May 11, 2014 at 11:33 PM Glad to have found this tonight. Gives me new insight into short presentations! A very nice offering indeed..

Jack Horne July 20, 2013 at 10:12 AM so glad to see this was a winner - just love it. I can clearly visualise the moon here

Skat A July 18, 2013 at 10:18 PM Hi Annalise, I love your star dust winning poem. Congratulations! Luv* SKAT

Sara Kendrick July 16, 2013 at 4:36 PM Congrats on your great win..Sara

Isaiah Zerbst July 16, 2013 at 10:13 AM I see you placed in a contest. Good for you! I would send this one to the winners if it were my contest. Nice catchy rhythm in the words there.

Nette Onclaud July 16, 2013 at 3:29 AM a dreamy, unique write, anne.. congrats on your fine award in my contest.. check my blog!..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich July 15, 2013 at 11:25 PM this is beautiful. Congrats I see it was a winner.

Richard Lamoureux July 15, 2013 at 8:58 PM Very pretty piece, congratulations

Shadow Hamilton July 15, 2013 at 6:56 PM Annalise congrats great poem Shadow x smiles

Toquyen Harrell July 15, 2013 at 5:28 PM I can just see the moon peeking through the window in your room. How beautiful, Annalise! Enjoyed :)

Poet Tacito July 15, 2013 at 7:51 AM Sounds like a good place to be right now. Especially the shimmering stardust...beautiful!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 14, 2013 at 12:38 PM - A beautiful poem Annalise - A gem! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)