Harvest Moon

rainbows harken farewell daylight summons closure stillness echoes final triumph's magic!

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/8/2009 6:34:00 AM

I am so happy to have the time to read your excellent Cinquain this beautiful Saturday morning Jim. Keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/8/2009 4:41:00 AM

Beautifully written. Keep writing.Sara:)

John Freeman

Date: 8/7/2009 8:59:00 PM

James I had such a pleasant memory of my grandmother,when I read you write here, she loved to grather veggies from her garden, thanks so very much, Sincerely Moses

Sara Lokken

Date: 8/7/2009 8:25:00 PM

A very interesting cinquain....love the second line....I must try one of these, looks like fun...Best wishes, Sara:)