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Explanation: "Beauty of Loved Ones, #3"

While cleaning out my parents' attic, I was attracted to a small family portrait. I stared at the photograph, the smiles on their faces somehow comforting me.  Their gazes met mine, and I sensed their love for me, a love as real as if they were in the room with me. My maternal grandmother, Helen Claribel (Morain) Stainbrook is in this picture (bottom right corner) and is sitting next to her parents, Stanley D. Morain and Ivy Catherine (Britigam) Morain.  Stanley and Ivy met while teaching at the Kansas School for the blind.  They married and had 15 children, including three sets of twins. Stanley himself was legally blind but still managed to work the land even during a long-standing drought and assisted others who struggled with their own blindness.

Helen had four children, one of whom was my mother, Winifred Christine Stainbrook.

Poem written for "Traditional Cinquain" poetry contest, Sotto Poet, sponsor, January 21, 2026.

HARDSCRABBLE LIFE-Beauty of My Loved Ones

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Rugged Kansas prairie Her hands rough with dawn tasks His fingers trace Braille on table Austere Schoolhouse ink and sweat smell of small hands learning Braille~ a language pressed on waiting skin. Alive. Fifteen Scrappy children Clarabel, Dulce, John~ syllables hauled up* from the well sweat, tears Drought years Calluses, sweat, Stiff-backed, and obstinate Heavy with weight of wheat and words Courage. At dusk, they counted heads and sang hymns of harvest~ Only thirteen grew tall as wheat. Strength, faith *hauled up from the well refers to both a physical action of rescue as well a metaphorical expression of support or accountability.
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Goldsmith Avatar
May 11, 2026 at 12:13 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write with Great Notes/Great Picture. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............
Gauthier Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 6:32 PM
Wow ~ very delicate way to honour the two children that dies young. Beautifully sctructured with intentional visual symmetry.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 4:31 PM
thanks for your tender and insightful comments. Grateful for your visits
Hind Avatar
January 22, 2026 at 5:51 PM
A lovely poem of memory, Sara :)
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January 22, 2026 at 2:35 AM
A lovely picture and a great family story Sara… Beryl
Etgen-Baker Avatar
January 22, 2026 at 4:39 AM
thank you, sweet Beryl
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