Hardly There

Forgettable,
She goes unnoticed.
Depression,
She feels alone.
Anxiety,
She can't handle her emotions.
Discouraged,
She never wants to go home.
Hopeless,
She feels tired of living.
Frustrated,
She misses feeling important.
Miserable,
She just wants you to know,
Spending time with you,
Is what she misses most. 

She looked up to you so much,
You mean the world to her.
She still loves you dearly,
You will always come first.
She sees you struggling with life,
She doesn't know what to do.
She wants to take away the pain,
wants to protect you.
She knows she can't do that,
knows it's not in her place.
She cares a lot about you,
She hates to see you like this.
She just wants you to be there for her,
she wants you to come back.
She feels like you're hardly there anymore,
feels like she's losing her dad.
It's like a part of you was torn,
and taken away from me. 
I miss you daddy,
I miss you spending time with me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 10/21/2011 9:21:00 AM
intene piece of poetry you have here, going to haunt me all day p.d.
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