Hardest Hits, Softened With Knowledge

The bright blue light
you sent that night
told me you're alright
Peace to you, wherever you are.

The clouds making way
on that particular day
told me you're okay
Peace to you, wherever you are.

I knew you would die
's why i wanted to try
and kiss you goodbye,
I love you now fly
Peace to you wherever you are.

And now my time has come
Wahey I had some fun
drinking cocktails of Rum,
lets go hit Heavens bars
My glittering fallen stars. Xx

©John-Ovan.P.Hull
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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December 6, 2011 at 4:42 PM
Very captivating work John...why do u think ur time has come...don't be dissapointed ,,hope this is just in writing and hope my comment finds u in best of ur health... PS- drinking cocktails of rum cud be so much of fun...I agree,,lolz
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December 8, 2011 at 5:29 AM
Cocktails of rum are such fun, im all good so no worries for me, just a vision of what will come one day and the people i will see when it occurs. X
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