Kale Brereton Poet Rhyme

Hardened World

Violent and miserable
had more support
than being calm and loveable
In a reality T.V. world
That's global
Love and goodness
are feigning
The future of humankind and community
is just a matter of awakening 
to what's entertaining.

5/1/2018
Kale Brereton

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Old Buck September 10, 2018 at 1:12 PM Kale: I fear we are all frogs placed in a pan of cool water. When the heat is turned up, the temp changes so slowly the frog, he doesn't notice but soon finds himself in boiling water. Welcome to the soup. oldbuck

J Hamilton Gist August 20, 2018 at 4:52 PM Interesting construct...adds to the depth of the write. Nice. My christian family member of the brotherhood and sisterhood of Jehovah's Witnesses. Please visit my page and take a look. Oh and be honest.

Heidi Sands May 26, 2018 at 12:03 PM This is full of truth. Welcome to the soup Kale :) Kale Brereton May 27, 2018 at 10:23 AM Thank you so much!! I am loving it, such amazing writers here!

Silent One May 26, 2018 at 11:51 AM Great first post Kale, welcome to the soup.. Kale Brereton May 27, 2018 at 10:22 AM thank you so much for the compliment! hope you have a great day!

Harry Horsman May 7, 2018 at 7:51 AM Looking in at your first post Kale..love the poem, and agree with everything you say. Kale Brereton May 7, 2018 at 11:04 AM Thank you so much for the support and kind words! Hope you have an awesome day!