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Violent and miserable had more support than being calm and loveable In a reality T.V. world That's global Love and goodness are feigning The future of humankind and community is just a matter of awakening to what's entertaining. 5/1/2018 Kale Brereton

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Date: 9/10/2018 1:12:00 PM
Kale: I fear we are all frogs placed in a pan of cool water. When the heat is turned up, the temp changes so slowly the frog, he doesn't notice but soon finds himself in boiling water. Welcome to the soup. oldbuck
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Date: 8/20/2018 4:52:00 PM
Interesting construct...adds to the depth of the write. Nice. My christian family member of the brotherhood and sisterhood of Jehovah's Witnesses. Please visit my page and take a look. Oh and be honest.
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Date: 5/26/2018 12:03:00 PM
This is full of truth. Welcome to the soup Kale :)
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Kale Brereton
Date: 5/27/2018 10:23:00 AM
Thank you so much!! I am loving it, such amazing writers here!
Date: 5/26/2018 11:51:00 AM
Great first post Kale, welcome to the soup..
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Kale Brereton
Date: 5/27/2018 10:22:00 AM
thank you so much for the compliment! hope you have a great day!
Date: 5/7/2018 7:51:00 AM
Looking in at your first post Kale..love the poem, and agree with everything you say.
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Kale Brereton
Date: 5/7/2018 11:04:00 AM
Thank you so much for the support and kind words! Hope you have an awesome day!

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